https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vjqDQjcA69I
This is the second draft of my trailer. I improved it using the feedback I received on my previous draft. I am a lot happier with the trailer now these improvements have been made.
Feedback from this draft I received is:
Remove the brother storyline because it isn't clear
I really like the trailer and it is a film I would go and see
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