This is the first draft of my trailer for my film 'My Friend Ava'. We did't have time to film the voiceover so this needs to be improved. I asked for feedback from my classmates to help me improve my trailer.
Some of the things they suggested were:
- Add more quotes to the trailer at the beginning to tell the story more
- Move the titles that says "from the creators of Rosie" to the beginning
- Move the clips at the end because at the moment they look like they are all happening on the same day
I noted these improvements and will make changes to make my trailer better
No comments:
Post a Comment