Editing Log

Third Draft

After we received feedback, we tried to remove Jack from the trailer. However, this did not leave us with enough footage to make the trailer long enough and and it didnt work as well. So we added a voiceover to try and make it a little clearer. I think it has helped to tell more of the story.

Reader Profile

Name: Daisy

Gender: Female

Age: 17

Lives: London,UK

Interests: Going Shopping, listening to music, watching movies

First Draft of Poster

Photoshoot Images

Social Media

We have made social media accounts for out film production. We have done this to keep engaged with our audience and keep them updated with the filming process.

Instagram
Twitter
Facebook

First Draft of Magazine Cover

Magazine - To Do List

• 
  Start Concept
• Sketches
• Include fonts
• Images
• Text size
• Conventions
• Collect reference photos
• Look at the Pinterest board made for my film
• Location or Studio?
• Where are the images going to be taken
• Dates and Times of the shoot
• See when the actors are free and arrange a time and a date for the photoshoot to take place
• What props and costumes are needed?
• Mise - en - scene including colour, figure, lighting, objects and setting
• What Models and Crew members are needed?
• Alfie, Rosie, Lucy - actors
• Emma - Hair and Make up
• Call Sheets
• Photoshoot
• Choose best photos
• Photoshop
• Manipulate the images
• Set the magazine out 
• Finished product

New Decision Website to Magazine

I have been thinking for a while and have done research on how to make my website interactive. However, I have struggled to find ways to make it interactive. Also my decision was to make my website on Tumblr hasn't been able to work as Tumblr is blocked on school computers so has minimised the time I was able to spend on it. Therefore my decision to make a website has been changed to a magazine front cover as I have done magazines in GCSE media so I know the basics.

Magazine Analysis

This is the front cover for empire magazine 

The colours used are consistent throughout which works effectively as it looks professional and not too brightly coloured to distract the audience away from the main image. Also it looks a lot more organised than if there were multiple colours. I plan on only using two or three colours on my front cover. 

The main image fills the whole of the cover to draw attention to the main feature of the issue which is Harry Potter. The shot is a mid shot. I think this is a good shot to use because it's not too in the audience faces.

THe headline are showing other films that are featured in the magazine which I'd like to show and include newest films to draw other audience to the magazine rather than just the audience of my movie. 

It is organised in a way that the headlines don't cover the main image which I will try to include.  

Second Trailer Draft

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vjqDQjcA69I

This is the second draft of my trailer. I improved it using the feedback I received on my previous draft. I am a lot happier with the trailer now these improvements have been made.
Feedback from this draft I received is:
Remove the brother storyline because it isn't clear
I really like the trailer and it is a film I would go and see